SHR4PNEL's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Snowbot]

Impressive

Did you draw this yourself? If you did, then I'm proud of you. Not that the graphics are awesome, but you used your imagination and your flash skills to turn basic drawings into something nice. Lots of people try to do so, but their work often ends up being blammed, for the reason they have no drawing talent.

backseatkiss responds:

Yes we did all the drawings of course, and thank you.

[GO NORTH IV]

Great!

That movie's great. But what happened to the previous episodes? I can't understand the story, but it's still great entertainment. I like the style of this, wich is simple and effective.

Extar responds:

GO NORTH III is up somewhere. Parts 1 and 2 aren't that good, but if you people really want to see them, go to my site.

[GTA Los Locktos]

Fixing might help

I recognized a city from bird-eye view. Though, you might want to imprve it a little. I didn't like the fact that the song stopped exactly when it was about to start... You should've stopped it 2 secs earlier or extended the movie for a little while. Anyway, your idea is good.

WinchesterLock responds:

No, I meant it to stop where it did. I meant it to look at the city and say "welcome to the jungle" as turmoil reigns over the city. It was completely intentional. Otherwise I wouldn't have had the volume start going down right before the credits....

[Luthien]

I saved it.

I'm proud to be the saviour of this movie. I liked the idea, though I can't understand how you got it... It's kinda unusual to see a dark hero chick killing blood thirsty armadillos... Anyway, keep it up and improve the graphics. At least, those blood and gore effects...

Ari0n responds:

Hahahahaa! :) Ive thought like you do many times while animating this :)
I dont know why, it just became like that. First the hero was a white male then i just wanted to make him a girl and then she became black, dont know how :D

[sneeky stick P.2]

Better than part one.

With my 5.08 votes, this went up from 2.19 to 2.21!! Can you believe it!!?? Just forget that, okay... I saw part one back when you submitted it and you liked my review. Then, I chose to see the new one and I liked it even more. Here are some tips:

- Don't lose your skills with the sound.
- Improve those text bubbles, or at least who they are pointing at.
- Sometimes we can see the different lines that make a stickman, like when they move their hands, and it's a little annoying. Fix that.
- Radically improve the graphics, make them the best graphics ever, and keep basic stickmen, that would have a certain style.
- Keep working and make those parts longer because I don't want the serie to be seperated in 48 parts.

Just do your best, I love them stickmen movies you make.

sleeeeep responds:

wow i thought people were done leaving reviews.... but since u liked it ill get finished on #3. By the way thanks for the tips you left. and #3 will be longer i promise.... its just that im a little stuck in the story on #3

[Fogmarl]

Nice thumbnail and sound...

The thumbnail looked so nice I had to watch it. I really enjoyed it. I like it a lot. You did very well on the sound and I think you deserve some admiration for that.

Slickernaut responds:

I thank yous for the review! You see, you really can judge a book by it's cover.

[thats some bloody shit]

whoa!

That is the sickest hum... thing I've seen today...

atticus3000 responds:

maybe its time for the spanish to invade the russians fort in germany to eat the rich bavarian custard donuts

[Sneeky Stick]

Nice

I liked it. Thanks for putting a plot to your first flash movie. That is still a little crappy but you've got my admiration 'cause you didn't submit a 3 second looping movie without music, without a background and with nothing but a skinny stickman pulling out his dick or vomitting in the middle of the screen. Thanks for that...

sleeeeep responds:

hahaha yeah well i didnt wanrt to half ass a flash movie just to sumbit it, next one comin soon

[Dont Give People Weapons]

needs better sound

Congratulations. The only thing I could recommend is a better sound. It ain't that bad, really, but there are big silences. It would be a great improvement to add a little happy music, birds signing or maybe little environment sounds. But, I agree that it made me give you a 10 for style.

AlterEgoZ777 responds:

thanx...yea most complaints with my movie s are the sounds...even from me i find it has bad sound...im jsut not good at that et....i would add song ifg i nknew how to make it smaller so the size wouldnt be so big...